Pothead Subculture
Structuring the Conclusion
- Revisit Case study: two to three sentences
- Summarize body 1: one to two sentences
- Summarize body 2: one to two sentences
- Summarize body 3: one to two sentences
- Summarize body 4: one to two sentences
- Summarize Body 5: one to two sentences
- Summarize Body 6: one to two sentences
- Call to action: one or two sentences
Note: the concluding paragraph is not, not the time to provide your opinions. Opinions are BAD. The purpose of a concluding paragraph is to chronologically, summarize all the main points of the paper.
Note: no in-text citations, no NEW data, no quoting.
First Example
For all the ten year old David’s of the world, for all kids, who are dealing with obesity, a diagnosis of hyper tension can be averted. No one should be a ten year old David; no one needs to have what could be a life-threatening diagnosis.
Second Example
For all the George Alvarez’s in the world, for those people who are overweight and engage in risky behavior, a heart attack, indeed is coming. There is no mystery in excessive alcohol consumption, over eating and the lack of exercising will lead to a heart attack. However, there is no need to die from a heart attack if one’s behavior is altered. There should be no more George Alvarez’s in the world.
Third Example
Although the 2014, Mercedes-Benz S63 AMG is made for very wealthy consumers, this car manufacturer is paving the way for future technologies to be packed and sold in affordable cars. In the future, everyone might own a piece of Mercedes-Benz as this new technology will invade the car industry.
| Intro paragraph With the desire to break some records and lose some weight, Marie, the Ironman marathoner has been reviewed because even though she knew how to make healthy food choices, the timing of her recovery fuel was limiting her ability to achieve these wishes. After training with her husband she went home to replenish with the right meal planned for her, but her husband instead, ate what he found at the moment. The next day she felt energized and ready to go, but her husband felt just sick. The core diet emphasizes the importance of repletion of muscle glycogen of a 4:1 carbohydrate to protein ratio within 30 minutes after finishing a workout. The sooner the better. Proper fueling before during and after workouts not only made Marie look and feel better, but also increased the quality of her training (Cassell 7-8-9-10). | Concluding Paragraph For all the Ironman marathoners, for all the Marie’s of the world that believe performance is but a science, there is real life changing information. For those who are like Marie’s husband, understand that nutrition and exercise go hand-in-hand. If, like Marie’s husband, people do not prioritize their meal plan, then they should understand that the quality of their training will not be optimal. A science does exist that will allow the Marie’s, or all the ironman marathoners to succeed as athletes and as survivors of this world, but unfortunately, there are too many husbands who do not understand the science of replenishing the body. |
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Example 2)
| Intro paragraph Myls Dobson was a four year old boy found unconscious by his babysitter. He was left in her care after the child's father was arrested. The young boy had endured beatings with a belt, being burned, and having experienced freezing temperatures. The babysitter also starved and tortured him (Solis 1-8-9-11). | Concluding Paragraph There are too many Myls Dobson in the world being brutally victimized by both parents and baby sitters. There are too many children like Myls, who need a fighting chance in this life. That is why there should be advocacy in order to stop the abuse like the one witnessed in the life of Myls. |
Call to Action
In order to stop the cycle of abuse and prevent domestic violence such as witnessed in the life of Myls, one could become an advocate for children caught in domestic violence by going to: www.childavocatecare.org
A Call to Action:
Example 1
As the truth of High Fructose Corn Syrup is revealed, and one would like to begin living an alternative life style, one should go to: www.nofructose.com
Example 2
If one would like to find more information about a Hypertension diagnosis, one should go to: www.understandinghypertension.com